The Law of movement
My mind
is a mirror
without colors
Sound
Light
Moving Nonmoving
Things
Space
Inner and Wider
Opinions
Heard and Read
Time
that flew at every way
All
Penetrating
and exiting
Creating an illusion of
existence on both sides
but moving only on one side
A wonder
At this state
this mirror
If present throughout this world
is the same
And that mirror
should be
the broken several pieces of the same mirror
Footnote: Mirror Mirror on the world ...
My mind
is a mirror
without colors
Sound
Light
Moving Nonmoving
Things
Space
Inner and Wider
Opinions
Heard and Read
Time
that flew at every way
All
Penetrating
and exiting
Creating an illusion of
existence on both sides
but moving only on one side
A wonder
At this state
this mirror
If present throughout this world
is the same
And that mirror
should be
the broken several pieces of the same mirror
Footnote: Mirror Mirror on the world ...
இயக்க விதி - பக்கம் 181
ReplyDeleteஇந்த கவிதையில் "அனைத்தும்" என்ற வார்த்தைக்கு முன்வரும் பத்தியில் இறுதி வரி இடம் மாறி இருப்பது போல அமைக்கப்பட்டிருக்கிறா? இது தெளிவின்மையின் அடையாளமா அல்லது வேறு எதையும் குறிக்கிறதா?
பல கூறு ஆன ஒன்று போலும் இது கண்ணாடி மட்டுமே பிரபஞ்சம் முழுதுமா?
கொஞ்சம் புரிந்தும் புரியதுமாய் இருக்கு. சம்மந்தமற்ற விசயங்கள் ஒன்றாக எழுதப்ப்ட்டது போல்
A lovely complex maze. A dialogue with a mirror set in motion. Words set against each other to create whole other. A precise study of how the self is reflected back and forth provoking a sublime mind map...the poet traces the untraceable set of reflections...
ReplyDeleteA very fine poem, which in a very vital way discusses his core philosophies. The last para put my dad in a puzzle..I am not sure if I still understand this poem. Can't wait to discuss this with you two.
Dad's Version
Law of movement
My mind
a mirror
without colours
Sound
Light
moving static
things
outside
inside and the vast
opinions
heard and read
time
spread all around
Everything
goes in
comes out
both the sides
looks like it is there
but moving only one side
wonderful
in this stage
this mirror
is one whole world
if it is one
than that mirror
should be
the broken several pieces of the same mirror
looks like aa mirror image - அனைத்தும் வரி முன் வரும் கவிதைப் பகுதியும் அதற்கு பின் வரும் பகுதியும்.
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