Ah
If said they forget
if written they dispose
if attacked they uphold
if not doing anything they attack
wonderful world
wonderful animals
Footnote: Simply displeased ... It is debatable about the poetic value this text carries
If said they forget
if written they dispose
if attacked they uphold
if not doing anything they attack
wonderful world
wonderful animals
Footnote: Simply displeased ... It is debatable about the poetic value this text carries
எனக்கு இது கவிதையாக தோன்றவில்லை. ஆனால் ஒரு ரிதம் இருக்கிறது
ReplyDeleteகவிதை ஐயோ - பக்கம் 172
ReplyDeleteThis poem is almost like a grumble..a mumble..A dissatisfaction let out in a few lines. There is a playfulness in it and an unabashed criticism or truth about our society. And the use of the word 'wonderful,' is charming as it topples the argument and begins to enjoy all the contradictions of our world.
ReplyDeleteDad's version
Aiyoo
If told, forgotten
If written, rejected
If quiet, they attack
If attacked, they bare
Wonderful world
wonderful creatures