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Praying for rain
Praying for rain
In my writing
Commanding for rain
I wet the ink
In a pale green colour
it spread on the paper
It was raining in colours
On a part I sprinkled the blue
On another side
I shed the black
On another side the red
Colourfully the rain
was showering
At that time
a thing came in between
Rain became that thing's colour
Pausing a moment
I thought of what
the changing rain's first colour would be
The rain was showering without colours
That rain without colours
was cold
Continuing
that rain was showering in my mind
Outside
the colourful rain
Every moment I paused
A thing without inside and outside
took shape
I m not able to relate the title and the poem content. Poem is not about rain. It is just a metaphor, also it is colored rain.
ReplyDeletethere is a small confusion "மழை அப்பொருளின் வண்ணமாயிற்று" is that just imagination or kind of puzzle?
Dad's version
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For rain to fall
in my writing
for rain to fall
I lightly rinsed the ink
light green colour
spread ont he paper
it was rainning in colours
in one area
i sprinkled blue
in another area i spread black
in yet another side, red
it was
rainning in colour
then
a thing
came across
it took the colour of the rain
what could be
the rain's first changing colour
I slowed down for a moment
rain as pouring
without any colour
it was cool
that rain was continuously
pouring in my mind
outside
rain in different colours
every moment i was slowing down
a thing got created without an inside or outside